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Drawn Blood, A Broken Promise

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After six years of fertility struggles, Eliza and her fiancé Blake finally had their miracle pregnancy—until she uncovered his fake amnesia and affair. Shattered, she ended the pregnancy alone. That same night, Blake pinned her down and forcibly drew her rare blood to save his mistress, calling her selfish for resisting. At his live-streamed wedding weeks later, he begged Eliza to return. Instead, she sent a package containing the aborted embryo and a recording of his confession.
Drawn Blood, A Broken Promise Summary
After six years of fertility struggles, Eliza and her fiancé Blake finally had their miracle pregnancy—until she uncovered his fake amnesia and affair. Shattered, she ended the pregnancy alone. That same night, Blake pinned her down and forcibly drew her rare blood to save his mistress, calling her selfish for resisting. At his live-streamed wedding weeks later, he begged Eliza to return. Instead, she sent a package containing the aborted embryo and a recording of his confession.
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Drawn Blood, A Broken Promise Chapter 1

After six years of failed fertility treatments, my fiancé Blake and I were finally expecting our miracle child.

Our shared dream, the one that had held us together through years of heartache, was finally coming true.

But then I discovered he was faking amnesia to cheat on me.

Heartbroken, I went to the hospital to end the pregnancy we had so desperately wanted.

As I lay recovering, his mistress was rushed into the ER, bleeding out. She needed my rare blood type to survive.

Blake found me, held me down, and forcibly drew my blood to save her.

He called me selfish for hesitating, twisting my pain into a weapon against me.

"This is why I don't love you, Eliza," he sneered. "This cold, selfish streak."

That was the moment the woman he knew died.

Weeks later, at his live-streamed wedding where he begged for my return, I sent him a package.

Inside was the aborted embryo of the child he denied, and a recording of him confessing everything.

Chapter 1

Eliza POV

The sterile scent of antiseptic clung to me, a cruel irony.

I lay on the cold operating table, my legs in stirrups, the fluorescent lights humming above.

Dr. Reeves, my mentor and head of Obstetrics, stood by the surgical tray, her face etched with a mix of professional resolve and deep, personal sadness.

She was about to perform the abortion I had requested.

This wasn't just a medical procedure for me; it was the final, brutal act of severing what remained of my six-year relationship with Blake Burch, the man who had promised me forever.

"Eliza, are you certain about this?" Dr. Reeves' voice was soft, her gaze unwavering.

"There's still time to reconsider. This is a difficult decision, and it affects your future in profound ways."

I swallowed, my throat tight. "I'm certain, Dr. Reeves."

My voice was flat, devoid of emotion, a stark contrast to the storm churning inside me.

Certainty was a luxury I hadn't felt in weeks, but this decision, born of desperation and a shattered heart, felt like the only path left.

A young nurse, Sarah, approached, her eyes wide with concern.

"Dr. McConnell, you've wanted a child for so long. Are you truly giving up on this miracle?"

She spoke gently, but her words were like tiny shards of glass twisting in an open wound.

I closed my eyes briefly, picturing the countless fertility treatments, the endless cycles of hope and crushing disappointment.

This pregnancy, after all those years, had indeed been a miracle, a fragile bloom in a barren landscape.

But miracles, I had learned, could be tainted, poisoned by betrayal.

"The miracle ended when its father proved himself a monster," I articulated, the words tasting like ash.

I opened my eyes again, meeting Sarah's sympathetic gaze. "There's nothing left to give up."

Dr. Reeves placed a hand on my arm. "Eliza, Blake might feel immense guilt if he knew. This child is a part of him too, even if he's… changed."

She chose her words carefully, hinting at Blake's supposed amnesia, the convenient medical condition he claimed had erased our shared history.

A bitter laugh escaped my lips. It was a hollow, desolate sound.

"Guilt?" I repeated. "Blake doesn't understand guilt. He understands convenience and fleeting pleasure. He's probably celebrating his newfound 'freedom' right now."

The irony hit me hard. He claimed amnesia, but his cruelty felt meticulously planned.

My leaving, my pain, my lost child—none of it would touch him.

If anything, leaving this child to a man like him would only bind me to his continued "forgetfulness."

He'd simply use the child as another excuse to play the victim, to further indulge his new, unbridled life.

He was immersed in his new identity, relishing every moment of it. My existence, my suffering, didn't register.

"We still need his signature, Eliza," Sarah interjected, her tone firm.

"As the father, his consent is required for the procedure. We've tried contacting him, but he hasn't responded to our calls."

"He has a responsibility as the father," Dr. Reeves added.

"It's not just about his consent, it's about acknowledging his part in this. He needs to face this, at least once."

I simply nodded, my gaze fixed on a distant point on the ceiling.

There was nothing more to say, no fight left in me.

A part of me, a foolish, naive part, still clung to a sliver of hope that he would appear, that he would remember, that he would care.

That he would offer some final farewell to a child he had once, long ago, yearned for with me.

I pictured the moments from years past, the hushed conversations about baby names, the quiet joy when we first discussed starting a family.

Blake, the celebrated cardiothoracic surgeon, had been so devoted then.

He'd rearranged his demanding schedule for my fertility appointments, held my hand through every invasive test, and cried with me each time a cycle failed.

He'd been the picture of a loving fiancé, a partner who built his world around ours.

This pregnancy, a fragile miracle after years of heartache, should have been the culmination of all those dreams.

Instead, it was becoming the final nail in the coffin of everything we had.

The operating room phone rang, startling me.

Dr. Reeves answered, her voice low and professional.

I watched her face, searching for a hint, a flicker of emotion. Her brow furrowed, her lips thinned.

When she spoke again, her tone was sharp, her professionalism barely masking her anger.

"Dr. Burch, as the father, your presence is legally required to sign the consent forms."

She paused, listening. Her grip on the phone tightened.

"This isn't a game, Dr. Burch. This is about a human life, and your fiancée's well-being."

Then, his voice, tinny and distorted, echoed from the receiver, audible even to me.

"Don't play these pathetic games with me, old woman," Blake sneered, his voice dripping with contempt.

"Eliza's trying to manipulate you, trying to act like a victim. She's always been this dramatic. Tell her to stop her little show."

My body went rigid. The air thickened around me, suffocating.

"She's not my fiancée anymore," Blake continued, his words like poisoned darts.

"And that child? It's not mine. I don't know whose it is, but it certainly isn't a Burch."

The casual dismissal of our six years, the ruthless denial of our child, hit me with a physical force.

It shattered the last fragile fragments of my heart.

Then, a woman's giggle, light and mocking, drifted through the phone. It was Kourtney.

"Blakey, dearest," her voice purred, "don't let that old hag bother you. Come back to bed."

The sound was a final, degrading blow, publicly confirming his betrayal, his utter disregard for me and our shared life.

The phone clicked as he hung up.

Dr. Reeves slowly placed the receiver back in its cradle.

Her eyes met mine, filled with sorrow and a silent apology.

There was no more hope. There was only the cold, hard reality.

The procedure began.

The physical sensations were dull, distant, overshadowed by the overwhelming emotional vacuum.

I felt a pulling, a tearing, as if a part of my very soul was being meticulously removed.

Each medical instrument, each clinical movement, solidified the finality of my decision.

The child, the symbol of a broken dream, was being peeled away, leaving behind only an emptiness that promised to ache for a lifetime.

When the anesthetic started to wear off, a dull throb began in my lower abdomen.

My eyelids fluttered open. Sarah was there, a cool cloth on my forehead.

My phone, lying on the bedside table, buzzed. A text message. It was from Blake.

Don't make a scene, Eliza. It's over.

Another message followed almost immediately.

The apartment lease is up next week. I expect you to be out by then. Don't think you can cling on to my property through some sentimental nonsense.

And then, the most callous one yet:

I'm doing you a favor, actually. You hated that place anyway. New beginnings, right? Consider it my last act of kindness, for old times' sake.

I stared at the screen, the words searing into my vision.

No flicker of remorse, no hint of regret. Just cold, transactional detachment.

My fingers, trembling slightly, typed a reply.

Understood.

It was a lie. Nothing was understood, not truly.

But there was a strange, dark relief in his bluntness.

He had stripped away every pretense, every lingering shred of hope.

He had, in his own twisted way, made my departure simpler, freeing me from the burden of agonizing over what might have been.

He'd meticulously carved out every piece of me that had been connected to him, leaving me raw but undeniably separate.

I spent three days in the hospital, recovering physically.

Blake never called again, never sent another text.

The silence was deafening, yet it confirmed everything.

He was truly gone, truly lost to the man I thought I knew.

During my recovery, I noticed his social media.

His public profile, which had once been a carefully curated reflection of our shared life, now displayed a vibrant, chaotic tableau of his "new personality."

Pictures of him with different women, always smiling, always in opulent settings, flaunting his newfound freedom.

He was reclaiming a "lost youth," a bachelor's life he had apparently felt deprived of during our committed relationship.

I created a burner account, just to check if these posts were public, a deliberate act of provocation aimed at me.

They were. He wanted me to see it—to witness his triumphant escape from our shared future.

The message was clear: my pain was his freedom. My loss was his gain.

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Drawn Blood, A Broken Promise of Contents

Ch. 1 Ch. 2
Ch. 3
Ch. 4
Ch. 5
Ch. 6
Ch. 7
Ch. 8
Ch. 9
Ch. 10
Ch. 11
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